MJJB Comments - Prologue to Chapter 4

kajexa0316th June 2011 09:57 PM


Dirty Dani16th June 2011 10:02 PM

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes
But I’m a Jackson, it’s in my blood. And the truth is – I love women.

I guess you could say I’m an equal opportunity lover. Yep I love dem girlz!

Short girls, tall girls, skinny girls, chunky girls, young girls, old girls, brown girls, white girls, Asian girls, Indian girls – well you get the picture!

hahahahaha LMAO!!! You know I love it Nicki! :heha:
And his convo with Jade was priceless! LMAO!!!

Update SOON!!!!!!
Go on, girl!!!! :slem:

kajexa0316th June 2011 10:13 PM

Mack Daddy Comment
Babe! Bravo! :bow:


Humor? Check. :yes:

Innuendo? Check. :yes:

Little romance? Check. :yes:

Little non-romance? :slem: Check. :yes:

Perfect combination for my kind of story! 
:girl_sigh:




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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 924880)
The way she’s going the audience is going to think Latoya is here tonight as a stand in for my induction into the Rock & Roll Hall Of Fame.

There’s no reasoning with this chick so I guess tonight the drag queen look it’ll be!

But tonight, well Paris could have done a better job!

“Okay I was calling you to say break a leg but now I think I’m gon’ change that to I hope you break your neck instead.”

:toofunny: Girlllll... my funnies! :heha: Looking like LaToya???? BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHA!!!!! :tlaugh: I like this already! :laughehe: and I'm LOVIN' his relationship with Jade ...


“Jade sweetie you know you’re my little ray of sunshine in a sad, gloomy, dark world right?”

“Pft whatever Mike, I’m yo’ reality check and don’t you forget it!”


:hmm: ... wonder what's going on with those two honeys he's got stashed away? Wonder what advice he's gonna need from Miss Jade???? Lookin' forward to it girlfriend. Great job~ :bighug:


mjfan♥forever16th June 2011 10:16 PM

Hey girl!! :grin:

So Mike loves all kinds of women, eh?? :slem:

I'm loving this already!!! :crazylol:

The conversation he had with Jade was hilarious. Jade is just playing hard to get...hell....I would too :smug:

I love this babe!!! I can't wait for you to post more!!!

:bighug:

damonikalovesmichael16th June 2011 10:18 PM

Hahaha I love it so far. Mike being a womanizer? I love it! Can't wait for more!

vicky16th June 2011 10:41 PM

Baby bay bay you know I love this so much already WOO HOO finally you posted this while i fell asleep. I stayed up till god knows what hour, THANK GOD you did though :ph34r:. Love, love , love this already you know I do....BRING ON CHAPTER 1!!!!!!

Love ya hunny :bighug::wub:

P.S Michael is a sexilicious man in this....let me live out my fantasies *giggle*

Carley17th June 2011 12:31 AM

NICKI Boo you wrote another story, I love this story babe already. Good job girl.

Menen17th June 2011 02:35 AM

Hey Nicki. I am digging this story hard. Michael is naughty like I like him to be and he likes him dem guls. He is also funny as hell. Buzzzzzz be gone Turkle. Lol. I can't wait for more hotness. Update soon Hon. Me likey. 

kajexa0317th June 2011 04:14 AM


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Originally Posted by Menen (Post 924989)
Michael is naughty like I like him to be and he likes him dem guls. 

... ^ and I likes YOU guhl!!!!! :kiss: :slem: (... but don't my Nickster that I said that. :laughehe: )



suzmary17th June 2011 05:20 AM

Sounds good so far. Can't wait for more. Michael is FINE as a total MAC DADDY, that's for sure. Can't wait. :hoplol:

butterfliew17th June 2011 05:35 AM

Love it,love it,love it!!!! Sexy,player,naughty,funny Michael who loves A.L.L. of them girls!!! Woohoo.....my fantasy!!!!! Great Nicki....can't wait for chapter1!!!! Love ya girl!!!!!

ஐGirℓ Is Dangerousஐ17th June 2011 05:36 AM

Wow - this is awesome and it's only the first chapter. :D You need to update this girl 'cause I need more. :cute:

bonzi117th June 2011 06:49 AM

Niceee! I'm loving this, Michael is a playa playa-pop the collar I see :hoplol:, hmm, let's see how long Jade can hold playing hard to get. Bring on the updates! :happy:

BreeLovesMJ17th June 2011 06:50 AM

ooooo.... me likey!!!!!!! this is great already....fabulous job, girl!!!!
:dance:

Lenore17th June 2011 09:49 AM

:crazylol::crazylol: Nicki!! :crazylol::crazylol: That was AMAZING!!! So VERY funny, and soo refreshing!! I love that you're writing it short, fresh and witty; and I LOVE Michael as an asshunter!! :heha:

You know I love your writing girl, and this little piece of witty awesomeness just shows once more how amazingly you write! So smoothly and beautifully! LOVE it!! :bighug: Can't wait for more!! :slem:

Mrs.blanketjackson17th June 2011 11:27 AM

Update soon im lovin this (=

Sandralin1317th June 2011 12:39 PM

FanFic of Michael of this phase of his life, are so rare!
By the beginning of the story, it will be good!

cptogte17th June 2011 03:56 PM

I like it. Keep going.

ilovemj197317th June 2011 04:14 PM

hey hun....I just read your story...I am already addicted...this is going to be awesome....I can't wait to read more :)



mjfan♥forever17th June 2011 07:48 PM

Hey babe!!!:wave:

I'm loving this guuurrl!:slem: His 'bad' side when he was referring to the reporters...it was hilarious!! I love him...he a baaad boy:highspeed:

Hmm....I'm not sure Jade us going to be mad. She's gonna be pissed the f*ck off that he ditched her for Celeste...ooohhhh someone is gon' get it trouble!!!! SMH lol

I can't wait for the next chapter girl!!! I'm loving this so much!!!!

:bighug:

shayshay2017th June 2011 08:02 PM

Lol great update hun! Soo michael is a wonanizer...I see. And I love it!

Sandralin1317th June 2011 08:28 PM

Jade lost friend tonight, no talking on the phone .... The conversation that Michael wants is another ....
Gret update ...

MJ'sKryptonite17th June 2011 08:31 PM

I'm lovin Mike as a womanizer:mmm:
Can't wait for more!

butterfliew17th June 2011 09:03 PM

HAHAHAHA,Jade has to wait for the gossip!!!!! There're other urges that have to be satisfied first:slem::slem:

I looooove it so much Nicki;I love this human,bad,naughty,sexy side of him!!! And his thoughts....OMG...I couldn't stop laughing Nicki;it's as if you were in his head....excellent,can't wait for more!!! I wanna see what he's gonna tell Jade!!!:grin::grin:

ilovemj197317th June 2011 09:33 PM

Dang Girl....this is the BOMB...I am loving the womanizer Michael.....Lawd is He Hawt lol.....I just feel a bit bad for Jade....but he loves women so he can't have just one lol...can't wait for more babe:)

Dirty Dani17th June 2011 09:48 PM

:heha: Poor Justin was giddy like a school girl! :hoplol:
And who is Celeste??? Girl... this cliffhanger aint right! :dry:

Amazing update, but we need more! :smug:

LOVEmj8817th June 2011 10:09 PM

Love it!!! update soon please :)

DINA17th June 2011 10:25 PM

Short girls, tall girls, skinny girls, chunky girls, young girls, old girls, brown girls, white girls, Asian girls, Indian girls – well you get the picture! 

Yes!! I qualified! LoL!! I am loving this fic! It's funny - a relief for me for I love humor - witty, charming and everything one could get out of a story. I love it & I can't wait for more.

bonzi117th June 2011 10:27 PM

Ahahahah! Michael is a trip, he is about to get some loving, but it won't be with Jade. Eh, sorry Jade, but the king womanizer has made his decision. I know it gotta be hard for him, but maybe things will change, and he will fall in love with Jade. Hmmm, sounds possible, but of course I'll wait for more updates. Great chapter!

damonikalovesmichael17th June 2011 11:28 PM

I love it! Hehehe Michael is one hot womanizer. Me likey!

vicky18th June 2011 01:34 AM

God he looked hot that night, i swear bung foot and all....Celeste is a hot mumma....you brought me back to n-sync, justin and britney bahahahahaha the happening couple...she was a s!ut then and still is hahahahah

Loved the update babe cant wait for more :bighug:

Carley18th June 2011 02:04 AM

Oh my my my someone is gonna get their butt kicked! hahaha I love it Nicki Boo. good job girl

luvumj18th June 2011 03:21 AM

I'm in love with this already

suzmary18th June 2011 03:51 AM

Nicki, girl, that was a great first Chapter. Can't wait to hear more of how him and Jade met and how they became "just friends" with each other. Is she nuts?

Celeste is HOT. Brittney? NOT!

Loved it, girl. :hoplol:

IAM_MUSIC18th June 2011 05:26 AM

SMH. Bad, bad Mikey! If he wants Jade, this ho'ing will have to stop. I wonder how he would feel if he knew she was gettin it in with other men.. hmm..

Menen18th June 2011 06:16 AM

Look at Mike Love in his white suit all dapper. Oozing confidence and sexiness and his hair. Gat Damn. Just fine all around. And to top the scrumptious sundae he is a naughty boy who is in love with his best friend? Intrigue. Puppy dog Justin was sweating Mike hard huh. Celeste to the rescue she's hot as hell's kitchen and Mike is cooler than a polar bears toenails. Perfect match for a steamy night. Love it Nicks update soon dollface. 

vicky18th June 2011 11:37 AM

God i want to rape that picture of him in the banner, gahhhhhhhh update miss i want moreeeeee!!!!

Ngbballgyrl1518th June 2011 12:08 PM

I dont know how I even missed this story especially with a name like Mack Daddy. i mean that just screams "Nikki read me!" lol But anyway I really like MD Mike. His inner thoughts had me crackin up haha And his and Jade's interactions were just too funny. If they as good as friends as they seem to be then something tells me that Jade has every reason not to cross that line with Mike but it will def be interesting to see how it plays out. Great start and I cant wait to read more!



BlueButterfly9718th June 2011 01:13 PM

Hey giiiirl!!

I just started reading your fanfic today and I'm VERY impressed :yes: Ooooohh, womanizer Michael :slem: Love the relationship between Jade and Michael.

Can't wait for the next update, girl!!

k!m18th June 2011 04:43 PM

im loving this already!!! so is his girl jade gonna be the best friedn who he realizes he's in love with after al this time or will it be nikita or soem other lucky heifer? anyhoo i cant wait to read more, and i will as soon as i get back from the gym

Mrs.blanketjackson19th June 2011 03:57 AM

LOVE this story hope u update soon!
Menen20th June 2011 03:59 AM

Phew!!! Girl. I'm glad your continuing the story. Spirits my be down but we ain't out yet girl. I know I keeps saying this but we need to ride this puppy till the wheels fall off!!

vicky20th June 2011 09:11 AM

BRING ON SEXILICIOUS MJ!!!!! Cant wait for the update babe :bighug:

Lenore20th June 2011 10:20 AM

Another woman? :eek3: Damn, I'm getting mixed up now! :mellow: Who is Celeste? :hmm: And is Michael in love with Jade? :hmm: And what kinda woman is Nikita gonna show herself to be besides the femme-fatale type? :hmm: Does Michael ever see his kids or does he spend all of his free time chasing tail? :hmm: What the heck is so great with Britney's dress? :fine: What does Justin see in her anyway? :eek:

So many questions! :mellow:

Update soon girl! Loving every part of this story!!! :wub:



vicky20th June 2011 05:36 PM

Sweet baby Jesus do I love this man....Nicki baby this man oozes sex, it is dripping off him and OMFG can I tell you i just want to lick him all over *giggle* Me thinks that Mr. Jackson is smitten by Jade especially if he is feeling guilty.

The kiddies were just too adorable I wanted to kiss and hug them and Michael is too adorable with them. I couldnt stop laughing at him sneaking to his room to put on PJs to avoid Grace's interrogation but in the end he got BUSTED!!! so funny but he promptly put her in her place.

The flashback was hilarious, OMFG I love Jade such attitude and sass, and the way he was ogling her goodies and then told him to take a picture it will last longer bahahahahahahha toooooo funny....I am absolutely loving the way you are writing this, its awesomely amazing.

*sigh* I feel sorry for Jade I think she might have some feelings for our MJ....i hope she was worth it michael cause i see her not talking to you for more than 2 weeks this time round...

LOVE this so much babe honestly his arrogance leaps off the screen and is hitting me in the face...GIVE US MORE!!!!! :bighug:
damonikalovesmichael20th June 2011 07:59 PM

Oooh! Michael you bad boy! Jade is mad and I don't blame her. I can't wait for the bext one.

ilovemj197321st June 2011 12:42 AM

hey hun great update....this Michael I am getting a kick out of he is suave....but I think he just messed up with Jade ......poor girl I feel bad for her ....I guess we have to wait till next update to see how mad she is at him ....thanks again hun :)

Menen21st June 2011 01:09 AM

OMFG Nicks lol. Michael is haughtier than kids in detention. Him calling out Jades name during sexy time with Celeste I was like MIKE no you didn't. Lol but Celest didn't mind as long as he was giving her the deep stroke so Que cera cera. What ever floats her boat. He was imagining her the whole time too. God it sounds like sexy time with Naughty Mike would be hella fun:mmm: When he said this
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"She could be just as annoying as a woodpecker at dawn, crazier than a bag of frogs on meth and more bitter than a box of lemons...".

I was like if she could be all those things and he still wants her and can't get her out of his mind even when he's buried deep in some hot chick then its gotsta be love for sure. Damn Grace mind ya business and go wipe some noses (that is your job after all). Speaking of the munchkins they were so cute fawning over their daddy. French Toast please!!!Lol. What was funny was Mike trying to sneak around and still got caught. I was rollin. Damn
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"...hope she was worth it"

. Sounds like SOMEBODY is also in love with SOMEBODY and got hurt by the blow off. If we know Jade like you described her it's definitely a Dun dun dun moment. I wonder how long the shut out is going to last this time.

Great update Nicks. Can't wait for more of this delectable treat. Love ya:huggle: 

Carley21st June 2011 01:11 AM

OH Mikey Mikey someone not very happy with you. Been a naughty boy. I love it Nicki Boo.

butterfliew21st June 2011 04:38 AM

Oh boy,it looks like Michael is in deep sh!t with Jade;that voice mail sounded rather scary!!! And even though Jade was in his mind all the time his magic stick was inside Celeste...he cannot use this as an excuse!!! I'm very curious to see what he's gonna tell her!!!

It looks like he isn't the only one in love though;just friends don't leave sarcastic and scary voice mails and never give their friend the silent treatment when his junior is playing around... LOL.

Grace should mind her own business;Mike Jr may be highly addictive,but he's gone,over,done.....veni vidi vici.

It was so funny how he met Jade;she was sure a very tough lady from the very beginning and she haven't change a lot since then!!! I'm very curious to see how they became friends.

Great update baby,can't wait to see what's gonna happen now!!:bighug:

shayshay2021st June 2011 04:49 AM

Smh...dumb move Mike.

IAM_MUSIC21st June 2011 04:58 AM

I sure don't blame Jade!! She oughta make his ass grovel for her and not speak to him for awhile.. maybe find another male buddy that'll really ruffle Mike's feathers.

Lenore21st June 2011 08:36 AM

Oooooooooohhhh!!! Jade is maaad!! I can't wait to see Michael try and crawl his way out of this one! :heha: Judging from the content of her message, I'd say she's about to put an end to their friendship; and being Michael seemingly in love with her, he's gonna be banging his head against the walls of his big mansion in despair! That, or he's gonna bring Celeste or some other girl toy in and lash his frustrations out on her in his own dirty way.

Bet Jade would love to know that!

I loved to read about how they met! Michael embarrassing himself was amazing; it's not something you get to picture all the time! I'm really wondering though, how did he manage to slip into Jade's good graces after such display or pervertedness?

Did he only have to remove his disguise for her to go "omg let's be friends forever! :crazylol:"? Somehow I don't think that's very plausible!

Please let us know more, Nicki! Loving it! :cheerleader:

BlueButterfly9721st June 2011 11:00 AM

Tsk, tsk, tsk...Jade is gonna kick your ass once she sees you, Michael!!

kajexa0321st June 2011 02:43 PM

Notice to Authors
Hi Nicki! :wub2:


What's up shuga-shuga puddin' pie? :kiss: :blush2:

Just dropping a quick note to let you know that I haven't forgotten any of my favorite stories. I am still reading; however, I am taking some time to 'clean my own house' and prepare a bit. :laughehe: I'm going to make an effort to get to all of my comments, but just in case I can't ... please be assured that whatever I owe -I pay :ph34r: and I owe ♚Mack Daddy♚ some :lol3: :wub: and some :slem:!!! :laughehe:

It has been a complete pleasure to work with you, enjoy your work, share my thoughts with you, and hear your feedback in return. You couldn't shake me if you tried. :friends:


Lovin' Michael forever,


Kathy :heartbeat:

MJ-Is-My-Morphine21st June 2011 03:43 PM

Mature Mike fic! Oh yes please. xD Pretty amusing.

suzmary21st June 2011 05:01 PM

Hey, Nicki, girl. I love this Michael. He's such a horny dog, but he's lovable. I hope Jade comes around and doesn't stay mad. Although some "I'm mad as hell at you" sex could be delicious, too! :slem:

Now, Grace? Pfft! That nanny needs to step off, cuz she's not his woman. I get the sense she'd like to be, but, as Mikey said: that ship already sailed, and he don't do sloppy seconds! :no2:

Loved it, hon. Can't wait for more. :hoplol:

Jade21st June 2011 05:25 PM

Hey new reader.. this is a great story so far :yes:... Michael is gna get it from Jade...cnt wait for nxt update:timer:

DINA21st June 2011 06:11 PM

Good gracious this Michael is not easy at all! Great update!

MJJSmash2821st June 2011 10:05 PM

Yo Nikki, just started reading this. I love it already and I love your style of writing. :D

mjfan♥forever21st June 2011 11:23 PM

Babe!! Girl, I'm loving this so damn much!! Holy sh!t this Mike is just....gahh!!! I want to do bad things to him.....:slem:

He seems to be falling hard for Jade but...him screwing around with Celeste reall screwed him over lol and you can definitely tell that Jade is pissed as f*ck if she only left one message on his phone.

:homer: not cool Mike....but I love your horniness:highspeed:

Gosh his babies are adorable!!! :wub:

Gurl, I can't wait for the next update. This is hella good, chica guapa (this means sexy chick:wink: ) and I'm anxious to see how Jade takes this...

Love ya girl!!

:bighug:

Sandralin1322nd June 2011 03:52 AM

Michael Actually this is hilarious, very funny. This time I think Jade will hang it for 1 month.
Great story, I love it.

kajexa0322nd June 2011 07:18 AM

Chapters 1 and 2 Reply
Nicki! :wave:


What can I say? Mack Daddy is funny as sh*t!!! :lol3: 




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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 925248)


...whilst Lance drools over me!

^^ The mental picture??? :toofunny: I swear. In a few 'short' moments, he done gone from 'Jade on the brain' to 'titties spilling outta dresses not phasing him' to 'filling wine glasses/having his way', to 'this hoe named Celeste, ciao bella, and a bucket of KFC'!!!! :heha: The boy needs a shrink and an AIDS test! *toofunny*

THEN.... to put his phone call with Jade ... the one he's been itching for ON HOLD 'til tomorrow??? :ohnoyoudidnt: Movin' on ...


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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 926725)
...crazier than a bag of frogs on meth

I keep f@cking around like a jack rabbit on crack!

^^ again... mental picture??? :dizzy: :toofunny:

Now I wanna play this little game called "You know you a hoe when"...


I’m pretty sure I called out her name a couple of times in the heat of the moment

and you ...

... didn’t even bat an eyelid.

She reassured me that she wanted nothing from me except my body.

I asked her if she was offended, but she merely shrugged her shoulders and told me I was being silly

Waiter! TWO std shots please!!! What a hooker! :rolleyes: Sneaking in at 7am??? Getting busted by yo' kids and yo' Nanny slash ex-booty call??? Tsk tsk... *shaking my d.amned head* ... but this:

“Grace, remind me again of your job title?”

Priceless. :laughehe: Then to get busted by the woman he thirsting for... Umph, umph, umph... Mr. Jackson, you've got to come a lot more correct than you been cum- *cough* ... comin'! :heha:


Great updates la chica mia! :bighug: :kiss:

MJ'sKryptonite23rd June 2011 01:38 AM

Oooo Michael is in big trouble now :no2:
Can't wait for more hun!

Chiatara23rd June 2011 03:48 AM

Another great story Nicki, Michael is really gonna have his hand full in this one. cant wait for more. Thanks, Dawn

elima24th June 2011 11:23 PM

this story is funny and absolutely great... i love it... he must have been like this... i like your writing style... can't wait for more... :bighug:

Dri25th June 2011 02:56 AM

I must say this ... this week has been very difficult for me and all MJ fans. I'm trying to accept what happened to him ... has not been easy but I'm trying. I must continue my life and then I do but I know that the month of June will never be the same for me.:aw:
Unfortunately we received a statement that the MJJB will close soon and it made me more sad. then I find this story ... :happy: I simply let myself be led by lightness of the text. I really needed laugh a bit. I'm loving reading Michael's POV! It's sooooo hilarious!
I'll miss it all here ... thank you for this amazing story! I hope to continue reading on the new site soon.

vicky26th June 2011 05:39 AM

Where's this update?? :timer:

ஐGirℓ Is Dangerousஐ26th June 2011 07:36 AM

This story has had me howlin'. I love the character of Jade - she seems quite foxy. This is a very different Michael than I am used to reading and I am really enjoying the change of pace. He comes across as being incredibly arrogant while still smoldering with sex appeal.

Hoping for an update soon. :happy:

schaney27th June 2011 01:59 AM

lOVE IT GIRL! tHE DEMANDING, SMART ASS, DELICIOUS MIKE I LOVE AND YOU HIT IT ALL! MORE SOON!

schaney27th June 2011 02:22 AM

OMG DO I LOVE THIS! HE IS JUST HORNIFYINGLY SEXY TO THE CORE AND BOY HAS HE MESSED UP WITH JADE! DOES HE CARE HELL YEAH! LOVED MOTHER HEN GRACE RATTLING HIS CAGE AND THE KIDS ARE ADORABLE THAT WHAT HE GETS FOR BEING SO SNEAKY! lOVED THE BARTENDER SHE PUT IT ON HIM FOR SURE! ABSOLUTELY INTICINGLY
ADDICTING AND I NEED MORE LIKE SOON!

Menen29th June 2011 03:10 PM

Hey Nick Nack Paddy Wack. Long name I know. Lol I'm can not wait to see the Jade shut out. Lol. I was wondering when you were going to bestow somemore of this Swaggerlicious Motherfunker :mmm: on us. Can't wait doll. I will be two steppin my a$$ right on over her tonight. Lol

Love ya Nick Nacks :heartbeat:

vicky29th June 2011 03:36 PM


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Originally Posted by Menen (Post 930315)
Hey Nick Nack Paddy Wack. Long name I know. Lol I'm can not wait to see the Jade shut out. Lol. I was wondering when you were going to bestow somemore of this Swaggerlicious Motherfunker :mmm: on us. Can't wait doll. I will be two steppin my a$$ right on over her tonight. Lol

Love ya Nick Nacks :heartbeat:

gurrrl seriously you crack me up, can i tell you i love your comments imma start stalking your sexilicious ass just reading your comments :heartbeat: U

FaLLeN_aNgeL29th June 2011 03:43 PM

Loving this hun! Can't wait for more!!

schaney29th June 2011 08:31 PM

Yes I am a ff fiend but it is all of yours faults you give me such great ff and then when I want updates I come across insane but I can't help it! Luv ya girl!

vicky30th June 2011 11:44 AM

update update, where are you???? come out wherever you are....

pssst pssst Nicki...i have a secret....I WANT AN UPDATE!!!

heheheheheh *runs off*

Carley30th June 2011 12:43 PM

OOO Nicki Boo! When is the next update hunnie, Please Boo Boo please do update soon!!!

Menen30th June 2011 01:49 PM

Nicks don't think I didn't notice the absence of a certain litte thing you promised last night. Left me all high( well not so high because I didn't get my fix.:boohoo:) and dry (without my naughty conjurings). For shame Nicks Nacks for shame. Lol. But for real though come on with the come on and give me some. :wink:

Love ya dollface:wub:

Dri30th June 2011 11:12 PM

no update...:girl_hysteric::girl_cry::girl_cry:
MjAngel30th June 2011 11:23 PM

she's in love wit him,lol

damonikalovesmichael1st July 2011 12:17 AM

She love him, that's why she acting that way. LOL.

schaney1st July 2011 12:35 AM

Ooh woman I need more the minute she got to the phone you stopped that was not nice I needed to know how he was going to squirm out of this mess he has got into! Gosh I love this can't wait for more!

Carley1st July 2011 12:55 AM

Boo, loved this chapter good chapter. I believe Jade is in love with him :)

vicky1st July 2011 01:15 AM

First of all you're excused cause this update rocked, but you better include some sexilicious MJ in the next update. As for a little Prince, geezuz this song is so hot and it brings me back to my high school days......and the YT vid i swear I love this movies ahhhhhh sexy mofo Prince is. I think you need to write Jade and Prince getting their groove thang on and see just how Mr. Womanizer like that.

I understand the man needs to get his nut, but geezuz....he sho has a weird way of showing he loves her.....hmmmm Mykal and Kit are going to talk for the first time.....good lord this is going to be a hot mess and i CANT wait to read it.

Now lets talk about this updating schedule that you have going on here, me no likes, so you need to change it to something more regular. I know everyday is out of the question, so how about at least once every 4 days. Chapters dont have to be long, so me thinks you can manage that waht do you think :hmm:

You know i love ya bay bay :wub: and sexilicious better be in the next update although mojitos and shots were good too lol

Sandralin131st July 2011 01:28 AM

And now Jade? Falling in love .... by a friend who tells you all about "girlfriends" .... It will be hard to handle ....
Great update!

Menen1st July 2011 05:18 AM

Poor Jade she's in love with Michael too. Little does she know that when Michael was all up in miss latina hotness he was calling out her name! So Kit doesn't know about her friendship with Michael and it's been five years? If so wow she sure can keep a secret. I hope now that she answered the phone and is about to come ear to ear with the man himself things don't get awkward with her and Jade. I would hate to see a friendship of eleven years come to an end over a man and vise versa I would hate to see Jade loose Michael either over jealousy or disapproval of her best friend.

Great update Nicks. I'm with Vicks on this we need to see some bumping of the uglies. Lol just kidding(no I'm not). Lol update with the other part soon Hun don't leave me hangin her by a thread babe.

Love ya Nick Nacks:heartbeat:

butterfliew1st July 2011 11:42 AM

WOW Jade is in love too!!!! Now,they have to do something about it;Michael's dreaming of her,but another chick's enjoying the Force and Jade's getting sick of jealousy wishing Michael with his Force being above her,behind her,beneath her,in her,all over her.....''sighs''...such a waste of time and energy:bleh::bleh: Do something Nicky to help these two:wink:

Good Lord,after five years being friends with Michael and her best friend doesn't know about him....amazing!!! Can't wait to see if Kit figures out who Mykal is;I hope this secret doesn't harm their friendship.

Update soon Nicki babe...our hot Mack Daddy should take some action to set things straight with Jade....geezz...the girl is about to die!!!!:crazylol::crazylol::crazylol:

BlueButterfly971st July 2011 12:47 PM

Oh dear...Kit will knoooow (and probably kick Jade's ass for not telling her :roflmao:) Anyway, nice update, girl. Be fast and sure to update soon :hoplol:

ஐGirℓ Is Dangerousஐ1st July 2011 05:04 PM

Oooh girl, did I miss an update? *runs off to check*

IAM_MUSIC1st July 2011 05:25 PM

Aww.. I feel for Jade. She definitely has feelings for Michael which is why she's feeling like that. Idk how he's gonna make this right. And uh oh, her friend is gonna answer the phone. Lol.




suzmary1st July 2011 06:52 PM

Wowza, girl. This Mack Daddy's gonna be a Smacked Daddy if he keeps on with his antics. He's like a weathervane, just following the beauties. Poor Jade. This won't be easy.

Loved both updates, sweetie. Loved them! :hoplol:

vicky1st July 2011 06:58 PM

That sl*t Britney, OMFG what in the heck was she wearing??? and mee-kal leve that ass alone pffft and is the pope Catholic?? mmhmm thats what i thought.. GOOD LORD he is going to bang that chick isnt he Nicki?? and you leave it there??? Now you must repent and give us another update.

Oh and btw pussy cat LMFAO!!!! She is going to be the death of his relationship with Jade, he is going to go to hell if he touches that bootay and if he thinks Jade will have his intestines and suspenders he should guess with what shes going to do with his d*ck, she gonna pull a Loreana Bobbit on his ass....

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiicki you sexilicious girl I loved it, hurry up and post love ya my gurl :wub:

Menen1st July 2011 07:57 PM

Nick Nacks you da bizomb. Michael is a trip. From practically dousing himself with pseudo phone sex to sinful cradle robbing. He just can't help himself. The sight of a beautiful fish just send his mind and loins into a bitter rivalry. So Swaggalicious. I could lay him on a plate and devour him whole I tell ya. :mmm: Poor Jade. She's in love with her best friend but Unfortunately her best friend is a man ***** (Ahem ,excuse me connoisseur of the ladies)

Great update Huns buns. I LOOOOVVVVEEE your oh so naughty Mike. I can just picture him and GAWWD what a sight. Update soon girl (tapping veins, prepping to be induced)

Love ya:heartbeat:

ddstephens31st July 2011 10:23 PM

That Michael knows he wants Jade but his womanizing ways continue to get in the way. He bet not sleep with that girl if he wants to stay out of jail and the newspapers.

luvumj1st July 2011 10:34 PM

ooh michael cant help himself at all

FaLLeN_aNgeL2nd July 2011 01:16 AM

Gosh,Mike is such a womanizer!! Poor Jade,i feel so bad for her...

Sandralin132nd July 2011 03:10 AM

This guy just have sex on the brain! Can not see a woman ....
Jade is lost with it ....

IAM_MUSIC2nd July 2011 07:07 AM

Smh I surely hope a man comes into the picture for Jade. Me thinks Michael needs a taste of his own medicine. And he better not do anything with that damn girl. I was bout ready to slap him for the phone convo! Lol.

BlueButterfly972nd July 2011 09:21 AM

Oh dear God...when is Michael going to learn?! :no2:

schaney2nd July 2011 02:28 PM

I swear he is dying to apologize to Jade and then wham bam he hot to trot for not one but two gorgeous whatevers?> Jade is going to rip open his heart and stomp all over it!
This man's mind is one thing and one thing only Sex and boy would he be worth it! Awesome update girl but only one problem I need more real soon like you said I am a fiend!

butterfliew3rd July 2011 06:50 PM

Oh boy,he's hopeless;his d!ck's working non-stop,anytime,any place!!!I'm very curious to see what Kit-cat pu$$y cat is gonna tell Jade about sexy Mee-kal and Jade's reaction to it!!!! I bet she isn't gonna be happy!!!!

And now that sl@t Britney....I hope he's gonna keep it in his pants,although it's highly doubtfull!!! Maybe it's about time for Jade to start looking for somebody else....with him she's gonna end up in jail!!!!

More.....more.....more....Nicki...I love Mack Daddy!!!

MJ-Is-My-Morphine3rd July 2011 07:01 PM

I bet I know why the girl called MJ Mee-kal. XDD

Dri3rd July 2011 07:55 PM

Girl...I'm dying here!Michael's POV is always so funny! :bleh:
THAT'S BRITNEY for god's sake Mikey!!!!WTF?!
Poor Jade...:no2:


Thank you!I LOOOOOOVE this story!:happy:

ilovemj19734th July 2011 03:37 AM

OMG Woman you the Bomb.....I loved chapters 3 and 4 sorry about not commenting ......I just have to say he is a totally hawt Playboy and he going to get his self in troble with Jade messing with her friend.....I can't wait to see what else is going to happen ....can't wait for more :)

MJ'sKryptonite5th July 2011 09:49 AM

My my my it seems there is no hope for Mike lol first he's having borderline phone sex with Jade's bestie and now he's about to get hot and heavy with Britney Spears :lol3: womanizer Mike is a trip!
I love this story hun keep it coming:D
elima6th July 2011 11:34 AM

hi nicki, this story is getting better and better in every chapter... if you move it before MJJB closes and MJJE opens please, let me know where i can find it... i love MD and i want to follow it... thanks :bighug:

vicky9th July 2011 02:10 AM

Hey baby I'm not good with goodbyes even though its not between us its more like a goodbye to MJJB even though this isnt about MJJB hahahaha Okay I wanted to tell you that you are amazing, that you have this knack of telling a story in this mehhh this is it you like it you like it, you dont you can get stuffed....something I really love about them....BUT you also have a way of pulling me in and dragging me around and through the emotions of your characters.

I love both your stories and I hope and beg you will continue with both.......you know me likes sexy older MJ there isnt many older MJ stories out there and we NEED YOURS!!!!

I love you and know that I am always here for you no matter what...btw the blog challenge is ooooon I have started my piece and its going to be smuttier that smut, I mean c'mon have you looked at the pics you chose for me??? There is no lovey dovey in those just pure sexilicious anamalistic LUST!!!!

yeah baby BRING IT ON!!! love ya babe xoxo

MJJ_Forever13th July 2011 05:28 AM

Nicki this story is too much, girl! LOL at the Michael in this story! He just can't help himself, little MJ just doesn't know how to stay in his pants smh. That boy litterally has the urge to hump the leg of whatever pretty face comes his way and it's hillarious! Jade is a trip though and he best watch his step if he thinks he's gone get anywhere near Ms. Pussy Kat and live to tell the tale :heha: But Lord knows Mike Jr. has a mind all his own and knows no concience for consequence :nono: Lil Miss Brittany showin up at his house!?!? Oh uh-uh...I smell trouble. Jail bait indeed, what is she 19? Lol shame on you MJ...but I can't complain! Even though I'm sure Jade will hang him by Junior from his Giving tree :highspeed: :heha:

Great story girl, can't wait for that update! :wink:

schaney14th July 2011 02:51 AM

Faint hearted that is an understatement! Love it though but don't forget what you have
on the back burner and you promise to finish one day! Luv ya girl!